Pujangga Cinta
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shadow_queen
^Putra^
-LuZ-
Cecyleea
hatake kakashi
Masamune_Date
icequeen
angelo
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Pujangga Cinta
Pengen tau nih... ada yang suka ngebuat puisi ga?? Terutama yang cowok-cowok neh... Klo pada bisa buat, coba dong, post salah satu karya loe di sini! Gak sabar lho pengen baca karya lo...
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
Harus original yaa ?
Kalo jiplakan boleh gak ?
Soalnya sering nemu puisi yang bagus2 neh,yang pentingkan nama pengarangnya dicantumkan
Kalo jiplakan boleh gak ?
Soalnya sering nemu puisi yang bagus2 neh,yang pentingkan nama pengarangnya dicantumkan
icequeen- Melting Ice
- Jumlah posting : 13
Age : 39
Localisation : Iceland
Registration date : 2007-01-23
Re: Pujangga Cinta
oh.. ga papa kok kalo saduran juga.. yang penting kan kita2 pengen baca puisi cinta yang bagus2.. ditunggu ya kak icequeen!
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
A white paper in my right hand
For no reason, I draw my pictures and throw them out midway through
That lights up tomorrow
My dirty left hand
Unnamed, I drew your picture and came across it in space
That lights up tomorrow
Endless blue, disappearing scenery, an ending winter
The terrible rain submerges the door that slips away
It echoes in the bottom of my permeated heart
Undependable tomorrow’s fleeting memory
Is also a white shadow cut off from a small light
After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
Will ultimately end and start
This gathered-up weak magic
The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
The end credits started to run
Break this boring image
That’s right
With you and I, the future begins to connect to
The world that carries the last figure at the end
Has your future that I wrote to this shadow grown hazy?
After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
Will ultimately end and start
This gathered-up weak magic
The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
The end credits started to run
Break this boring image
That’s right
For no reason, I draw my pictures and throw them out midway through
That lights up tomorrow
My dirty left hand
Unnamed, I drew your picture and came across it in space
That lights up tomorrow
Endless blue, disappearing scenery, an ending winter
The terrible rain submerges the door that slips away
It echoes in the bottom of my permeated heart
Undependable tomorrow’s fleeting memory
Is also a white shadow cut off from a small light
After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
Will ultimately end and start
This gathered-up weak magic
The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
The end credits started to run
Break this boring image
That’s right
With you and I, the future begins to connect to
The world that carries the last figure at the end
Has your future that I wrote to this shadow grown hazy?
After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
Will ultimately end and start
This gathered-up weak magic
The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
The end credits started to run
Break this boring image
That’s right
Masamune_Date- Crystal Ice Satue
- Jumlah posting : 320
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-01-27
Re: Pujangga Cinta
klo gw ngirimnya kek lirik lagu gmn??kan ampir mirip2 ama puisi tuh...
hatake kakashi- Immortal Ice Galaxian
- Jumlah posting : 3062
Age : 39
Localisation : konohagakure
Registration date : 2007-01-20
Re: Pujangga Cinta
boleh2! Harus keren! awas klo enggak...
Date:
Date:
Cecyleea- Invierno Corazon
- Jumlah posting : 427
Age : 33
Localisation : Osaka, japan
Registration date : 2006-12-17
Re: Pujangga Cinta
silahkan... date seneng buat puisi pake basa inggris ya? baguus...
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
banyak bunga layu...
sebelum berkembang...
ada yg terindah...
tapi wanginya tak selalu...
seindah bentuknya...
malahan mungkin durinya...
menusuk hatiku...
lukai jiwaku...
tapi aku yakin nanti...
ada satu untukku...
mengharumi hari...
mengharumi hari...
sebelum berkembang...
ada yg terindah...
tapi wanginya tak selalu...
seindah bentuknya...
malahan mungkin durinya...
menusuk hatiku...
lukai jiwaku...
tapi aku yakin nanti...
ada satu untukku...
mengharumi hari...
mengharumi hari...
hatake kakashi- Immortal Ice Galaxian
- Jumlah posting : 3062
Age : 39
Localisation : konohagakure
Registration date : 2007-01-20
Re: Pujangga Cinta
wah, hatake...boleh juga tuh... u lagi patah hati tah?
Cecyleea- Invierno Corazon
- Jumlah posting : 427
Age : 33
Localisation : Osaka, japan
Registration date : 2006-12-17
Re: Pujangga Cinta
waktu mungkin salah mengabarkan tentang rasa kepadaku kemarin..
warna warni tentangnya telah pudar
dan tak lagi mampu memendarkan cahaya padaku
LAGI...
dan saat ku pulang ke kota ini lagi..
telah sempurna kutabur kenanganku di pusara kepergiannya...
warna warni tentangnya telah pudar
dan tak lagi mampu memendarkan cahaya padaku
LAGI...
dan saat ku pulang ke kota ini lagi..
telah sempurna kutabur kenanganku di pusara kepergiannya...
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
Someone said that it’s off
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
Someone said that it’s off
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
I hate this modern day
Sometimes its not up to me
No one can be sure
No no I don’t care where you go
There is no hope
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
Someone said that it’s off
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
I hate this modern day
Sometimes its not up to me
No one can be sure
No no I don’t care where you go
There is no hope
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
Let’s go
(I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me)
I’ve got you,I’ve got you,I’ve got you,I’ve got you
You need me
You lose your friends
ntu gw ambil dr internet....
lirik lagu....
lagu jepang...gw ambil translatenya.....
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
Someone said that it’s off
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
I hate this modern day
Sometimes its not up to me
No one can be sure
No no I don’t care where you go
There is no hope
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
Someone said that it’s off
I say get you somebody else
You give me the only hope
I want to stop you, my life
I hate this modern day
Sometimes its not up to me
No one can be sure
No no I don’t care where you go
There is no hope
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me
Let’s go
(I do not lie, your loves not strong, quit accusing me)
I’ve got you,I’ve got you,I’ve got you,I’ve got you
You need me
You lose your friends
ntu gw ambil dr internet....
lirik lagu....
lagu jepang...gw ambil translatenya.....
Masamune_Date- Crystal Ice Satue
- Jumlah posting : 320
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-01-27
Re: Pujangga Cinta
bikin terharu
hiks...
hiks....
hiks...
hiks....
-LuZ-- Ice Block
- Jumlah posting : 120
Localisation : garage island
Registration date : 2007-02-10
Re: Pujangga Cinta
wuidih.. ciamik-ciamik!!
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
aku hanya bisa terdiam melihat kau pergi...
dari sisiku...
dari sampingku...
tinggalkan aku seakan semuanya...
yg pernah terjadi...
tak lagi kau rasa...
tak pernah sedikitpun aku bayangkan...
betapa hebatnya cinta yg kau rasakan...
hingga waktu beranjak pergi...
kau mampu hancurkan hatiku...
by: ipang BIP (ada yg hilang)
bentar gw mo bikin yg original bikinan gw...
dari sisiku...
dari sampingku...
tinggalkan aku seakan semuanya...
yg pernah terjadi...
tak lagi kau rasa...
tak pernah sedikitpun aku bayangkan...
betapa hebatnya cinta yg kau rasakan...
hingga waktu beranjak pergi...
kau mampu hancurkan hatiku...
by: ipang BIP (ada yg hilang)
bentar gw mo bikin yg original bikinan gw...
hatake kakashi- Immortal Ice Galaxian
- Jumlah posting : 3062
Age : 39
Localisation : konohagakure
Registration date : 2007-01-20
Re: Pujangga Cinta
ini.. hatake yang lagi patah hati atau gimana sih??
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
Stamping the errors that just missed one another
I’m always searching for that reason, that I smashed up a little too much
I’m frantic in the morning that has slipped off
I’m mourning and crying over the moment that I cut up a little too much
The words that don’t sound out in my heart
I’ve already forgotten the reason why
Break it
The sad spring, it hasn’t budded
I’ll sever it’s connection to the world
By means that I hold back
Without moving the shaking needle forward
I’m waiting to find someone, and connect with them
The words that don’t sound out in my heart
I’ve already forgotten the reason why
The words sound out, but they don’t reach you
You’ve already forgotten about me
Break it
Remember
Break down the wall
Remember
I’m always searching for that reason, that I smashed up a little too much
I’m frantic in the morning that has slipped off
I’m mourning and crying over the moment that I cut up a little too much
The words that don’t sound out in my heart
I’ve already forgotten the reason why
Break it
The sad spring, it hasn’t budded
I’ll sever it’s connection to the world
By means that I hold back
Without moving the shaking needle forward
I’m waiting to find someone, and connect with them
The words that don’t sound out in my heart
I’ve already forgotten the reason why
The words sound out, but they don’t reach you
You’ve already forgotten about me
Break it
Remember
Break down the wall
Remember
Masamune_Date- Crystal Ice Satue
- Jumlah posting : 320
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-01-27
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
i feel nothing....
i feel useless....
i feel empty....
i'm trapped in the darkness....
lost in dreams....
where are you?
Why are you not here when i need you?
when i need you most....
what should i do?
so i can found you...
should i wait for you to come??
should i wait for you to find me??
i don't know..
i don't know what to do
can someone tell me what to do??
is there nothing i can do??
no.....i can't be like this...
let's get up and run forward
toward the light
which will lead me to you...
i don't care how far it is...
even though it's far...
i don't care....
i feel useless....
i feel empty....
i'm trapped in the darkness....
lost in dreams....
where are you?
Why are you not here when i need you?
when i need you most....
what should i do?
so i can found you...
should i wait for you to come??
should i wait for you to find me??
i don't know..
i don't know what to do
can someone tell me what to do??
is there nothing i can do??
no.....i can't be like this...
let's get up and run forward
toward the light
which will lead me to you...
i don't care how far it is...
even though it's far...
i don't care....
Masamune_Date- Crystal Ice Satue
- Jumlah posting : 320
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-01-27
Re: Pujangga Cinta
selama angin malam berlalu...
dan ku akan selalu mnemanimu....
sampai kau tertidur lelap....
dan menghilang seiring gelap...
walau kau tak slmanya di sisiku...
aku tetap menyangimu..
walau aku harus prgi ke ujung dunia...
akan ku jaga kau slalu.....
dan langit membawaku ke angkasa luas...
bersma sayangku yg aku ajak...
selamanya berdua terbang tinggi....
andai kan alam semesta ini mlik kita....
Ku petik bintang yg terang....
dan ku berikan kepda cintaku....
dan kan ku jadikan bintang itu sebgai kenangan....
yg tak terlupakan untukmu.....
dan ku akan selalu mnemanimu....
sampai kau tertidur lelap....
dan menghilang seiring gelap...
walau kau tak slmanya di sisiku...
aku tetap menyangimu..
walau aku harus prgi ke ujung dunia...
akan ku jaga kau slalu.....
dan langit membawaku ke angkasa luas...
bersma sayangku yg aku ajak...
selamanya berdua terbang tinggi....
andai kan alam semesta ini mlik kita....
Ku petik bintang yg terang....
dan ku berikan kepda cintaku....
dan kan ku jadikan bintang itu sebgai kenangan....
yg tak terlupakan untukmu.....
^Putra^- Melting Ice
- Jumlah posting : 84
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-02-14
Re: Pujangga Cinta
hidup itu keras jow....
halahh....
halahh....
Masamune_Date- Crystal Ice Satue
- Jumlah posting : 320
Age : 35
Registration date : 2007-01-27
Re: Pujangga Cinta
hmm mana lagi neeh yang mau ngirim poem nya?
angelo- Tower Of Ice
- Jumlah posting : 793
Age : 34
Localisation : Piazza San Angelo, North Pole
Registration date : 2007-01-13
Re: Pujangga Cinta
ikutan....
First time i saw you.......
I was scare to touched you.....
First time i touched you....
I was scare to kissed you....
First time i kissed you....
I was scare to loved you....
Now, that i love you....
I'm scare to lose you....
First time i saw you.......
I was scare to touched you.....
First time i touched you....
I was scare to kissed you....
First time i kissed you....
I was scare to loved you....
Now, that i love you....
I'm scare to lose you....
runz luv black- Ice Storm
- Jumlah posting : 1205
Age : 34
Localisation : Bandunggakure
Registration date : 2007-03-21
Re: Pujangga Cinta
grammarnya banyak yang salah (maaf, jiwa kritikus)
orangSTRES- Melting Ice
- Jumlah posting : 82
Age : 32
Localisation : Sunagakure
Registration date : 2007-11-04
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